Tutor for a fantasy writer

Hi, I have been working on writing my fantasy novel for a few years. Although I only have a little over a few chapters written, I consider myself a writer with intermediate experience.
 

I’m looking to polish my writing skills. One thing specifically is to make my writing less ‘technical’ or ‘mechanical’ which a few critiquers mentioned I have for my first chapter.
 

I’m hoping to find someone who would be willing to meet once a week for about a month. Examples and exercises pointing out technical writing, and how tocorrect it I think would help me the most. I enjoy homework. :) I’m open to learning more if you may notice any other things in my writing and think you can help brush up my skills. I will pay of course, long as it reasonable. If we both feel it’s worth our time maybe we can continue on more meetings.

If interested you can email me below and let me know of a price and your writing credentials. I live in north suburbs.

I look forward to hearing from you!

 Nicole

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